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C04

I read the manga, to be true, i didn’t say my translation is correct too. but i can’t agree with the status translation. I will post the japanese version and translate version. If you guys have any comment or correction, please comment.

Meeting With the Gods

Everything is white.

When his eyes get used to it, Cain sees his surrounding.  He is now in a different place from before.

There is nothing in this place, just white.

[What is this!?]{Cain}

[Foffoffo. This is the world of Gods. At last, you reach 5 years old. I`ve been waiting for so long Cain Von Silford. Or should i say Shiina Kazuya?]{GOD?}

Being called so sudden, he got surprised and turn his back, there is a table which has a space for ten people, the old man voice who called me in the middle with some people sitting there.

[If you know the name Kazuya that means you know i am being reincarnated?]{Cain}

Cain is asking the old man who sat on the middle.

[Including that, let‘s talk slowly. Don’t just stand there, sit here will ya.]{GOD?]

He sits in the middle, in front of the old man. In front of him is the old man while there were 3 men and 3 women in his left and right.

[First, let’s start with an introduction. My name is Zenom. I am the one you know as God of Creation who creates this world.]{Zenom}

He surprised the fact that the freak old man is the god of creator.

[And as i am a god, i can hear the voice of your heart]{Zenom}

Zenom said that as he stroke his beard while laughing.

Cain feels cold sweat as soon as he heard that.

[Now that i am reincarnated, I called Cain now. My parents named me Cain. In this world, please call me Cain Von Silford. Please to meet you.]{Cain}

he stood up and bow while introducing himself.

As might be expected, he needs to use formal speech when talking to the god of creator since he doesn’t have enough courage to talk casually.

[Umu, let’s talk about your reincarnation first then, Lime! explain it.]{Zenom}

The long white hair woman who sat on the right side is flinching.

[My name is Lime. I am a god who controls life and death. First, about your reincarnation, it was requested by Earths god to reincarnate you here. The thing is, your death is not in the schedule, so cant be included in the cycle of life on earth.]{Lime}

[E, I was protecting a girl at that time. Was it bad?]{Cain}

[From what i heard from earth’s god, when the culprit try to stab you, the culprit should slip out, and get held by the people around, that was the real plan]{Lime}

[———- It can’t be, my death was in vain?]{Cain}

after all the courage to face it, when he was told it was in vain, he got discouraged.

[Yes. The culprit hadn’t hurt anyone in the vicinity, but he got murder charges by killing you, his sin got harsher.]{Lime}

[Not only i just dead, but i am making the culprit’s sin more harsher….]{Cain}

[Earth’s god was complaining to, for making thing’s complicated]{Lime}

[Lime, don’t be too straight with that…]{Zenom}

God of creation makes a follow up with a bitter smile.

After learning the truth, Cain feels sad rather than regret. He didn’t expect a stranger to get involved to be a misfortune, everyone must be feeling the same.

[You can’t be reincarnated on Earth, that’s why i am holding onto your soul. At that time, you officially dead on earth after all, after negotiating with Earth’s god, you can keep your memories as it is so our world can develop. But if you suddenly have your memories after your birth, you will be burden by it, we seal it so when you reach 5 years old it will be released, but you already have your memories at 3 years old.]{Lime}

Cain watching the god lower her head while apologizing, he said.

[Lime-sama, I have received this body for 5 years, i retrieve my memories for 2 years already, now i am having so much fun in this world. At the world before, i already dead, and kinda make me shock, i know it is foolish to hope to be back. And, the life before, i already lose my parents when i was little, and last one my grandfather too, left me alone. Now i have my family and my big sister. In this world, there’s magic and i really live my life, so please don’t apologize. On the contrary for letting me have my memories, I thank you from the bottom of my heart. At 3 years old, i retrieved my memories, I can learn a lot about language and magic, so it is no problem at all]{Cain}

On the contrary, Cain bows his head to gods and say thank you. Because he really feels that his life now is so much fun. There’s magic. And the most important one is he has his family.

[Un, you, good. I really like you]{GODS?}

Black mantle woman with long black hair is joining the conversation.

[I am the Magic God Reno. Cain-kun, from 3 years old you have been practicing magic right?. Time to time i have been watching you, you know. I’ll give you my divine protection, please keep your training]{Reno}

[Umu, We will give you our divine protection, I know we will be meeting again after all. Foffoffo]{Zenom}

Meet again], i don’t know the meaning of that, Leine-neesan too has God of magic Divine protection, i am so grateful.

[First of all, let’s introduce the gods here. Lime and Reno is good right. The one sit beside her is God of Earth Bela. The opposite one with muscle is , God of Martial Arts, Sarnos. Beside him is God of skill Grim. the bigger one is God of Trade Panam ja.]{Zenom}

The first one to talk is Sarnos, God of Martial Arts.

[Yoo Cain. Don’t practice magic all day, you should train your body too okay. I’ll give you my divine protection so you will learn skill more easily.]{Sarnos}

[I am god of skill Grim. I’ll give you my divine protection. There are so many things in this world that is lacking. There’s no entertainment in this world after all. As long you don’t overdo things, you can bring use your knowledge from previous life to this world.]{Grim}

All the gods giving me their divine protection.

Is it really okay to receive this much, i am hearing the gods talking while pondering about that.

The last one is from God of Creation

[My divine protection is, you can confirm it when you return to the real world. The times up. Yo Cain, Let’s meet again. Please be well]{Zenom}

After the God of creation said that, my consciousness is falling.

When i realize, in front of me there is Leine-neesan’s face.

[Cain! You okay?]{Leine}

Wha, Leine-neesan.

Am i back.

It seems the priest is taken aback

[Oo. The god’s statue are shining so brightly]{Priest}

The priest started to pray to god’s statue

When i see my surrounding family, they seem surprised

After waiting for a while, the priest’s prayer has done.

[With this, the baptism is over. The lights from before are the meaning the gods giving their divine protection is what i thinking.  Please continue to grow up and feels gratitude to the gods by praying]{Priest}

[Thank you very much]

We bow our head to the priest and god’s statue and leave the church.

We all, silence while riding the wagon.

The one who breaks the silence was my father Garm.

[What was that light. When Leine’s baptism, there was no light like that right. Cain, do you know anything?]{Garm}

[Father, i too don’t really understand]{Cain}

As expected i can’t tell them that i met god right.

[Is that so…. Maybe you really receive divine protection after all.]{Garm}

[When we reach home, you should check your own status. First you check it by yourself, and if you’ve got something to say, just report it to me]{Garm}

[Father, thank you so much. I will confirm it after we reach home]{Cain}

Leine is joining the conversation.

[Cain-kun! You have seen my status , so i can see your status too okay!]{Leine}

[Un! I understand Leine-neesan. I hope i get divine protection.]{Cain}

I have met the gods, received divine protection, i can’t wait to check my status.

While being shaken by the wagon, going back to home and arrive at our home.

I return to my room and take a deep breath.

[It was Status right]{Cain}

[STATUS]

Invisible glass appear in front of me and displaying

[Name]Cain Von Silford

[Race]Human Race[Gender]Male[Age]5 years

[Title]Margrave Family 3rd Son, Reincarnator, Apostle of God

[Level]1

[Strength]180/180

[Magic Power]34560/34560

[Ability Rank] S+

Magic

  • Creation Magic Lv 10
  • Fire Magic Lv 10
  • Wind Magic Lv 10
  • Water Magic Lv 10
  • Earth Magic Lv 10
  • Light Magic Lv 10
  • Dark Magic Lv 10
  • Space time Magic Lv 10
  • Lifestyle Magic

Skill

  • Appraisal Lv 10
  • Item Box Lv 10
  • Martial Arts Lv 10
  • Body Technique Lv 10
  • Physical Resistance Lv 10
  • Magical Resistance Lv 10

Divine Protection

  • God Of Creation Divine Protection Lv 10
  • God of Life Divine Protection Lv 10
  • God of Magic Divine Protection Lv 10
  • God of Earth Divine Protection Lv 10
  • God of Martial Arts Divine Protection Lv 10
  • God of skill Divine Protection Lv 10
  • God Of Trade Divine Protection Lv 10

[……]{Cain}

I can’t collect my mind.

I place my hand on the place i fall, i still can’t stand up.

There’s a lot of place i want to complain.

[Oh please god, i am really grateful for the divine protection, but this is too much…… God’s divine protection isn’t it just from lv 1 to 5! What is wrong with this lv 10 Divine protection, Even my father didn’t tell me about this.]{Cain}

From 3 years till now, i kinda forget to restraint my self, but it seems the even the gods didn’t know the words self restraint.

[If i show my status like this, i don’t even know what’s gonna happen. Anothe thing, What’s with the Apostle of God! if the people from the church knows about this, i can’t go back home right! Is there anyway i can hide my status…..]{Cain}

Cain is thinking really hard…..

Japanese Status

『ステータス』

【名前】カイン・フォン・シルフォード

【種族】人間族 【性別】男性 【年齢】五歳

【称号】辺境伯家三男 転生者 神の使徒

【レベル】1

【体力】180/180

【魔力】34,560/34,560

【能力】S+

【魔法】

創造魔法Lv.10

火魔法Lv.10

風魔法Lv.10

水魔法Lv.10

土魔法Lv.10

光魔法Lv.10

闇魔法Lv.10

時空魔法Lv.10

生活魔法

【スキル】

鑑定Lv.10

アイテムボックスLv.10

武術Lv.10

体術Lv.10

物理耐性Lv.10

魔法耐性Lv.10

【加護】

創造神の加護Lv.10

生命神の加護Lv.10

魔法神の加護Lv.10

大地神の加護Lv.10

武神の加護Lv.10

技能神の加護Lv.10

商業神の加護Lv.10

8 tanggapan untuk “C04”

  1. From the japanese status i see there, space time magic has lv.. i thing Tl-sama forgot about it.. btw thanks for the update..

    as expected i like more LN than manga.. i mean we love reading thats why we are here!

    Disukai oleh 1 orang

  2. It needs at least one more edit. You need to capitalize all your letter I’s when it is by itself as a word. Also you forgot to capitalize some of your sentence beginnings.

    Suka

  3. Once again, Thx for the chapter.
    “there is a table which has a space for ten people, the old man voice who called me in the middle with some people sitting there.” -> Seems strange, did you mean “There is a table whith enough space for ten people, and the old man who called me is in the middle with some other people sitting beside him” ?
    “If you know the name Kazuya that means you know i am being reincarnated?” -> “If you know the name Kazuya that means you know i was reincarnated?”
    “He surprised the fact that the freak old man is the god of creator.” -> “He was surprised by the fact that this freaky old man is the god of creation”
    “Please to meet you” -> “Pleased to meet you”
    “he stood up and bow while introducing himself.” -> “He stood up and bowed while introducing himself.”
    “God of creator” -> Either “Creator god” or “God of Creation”
    “when the culprit try to stab you, the culprit should slip out, and get held by the people around” -> “when the culprit tried to stab you, he should have slipped out, and get held by the people around”
    “Not only i just dead” -> “Not only did i die”
    “Earth’s god was complaining to” -> “Earth’s god was complaining too”
    ” Cain feels sad rather than regret” -> Either ” Cain feels sadness rather than regret” or ” Cain feels sad rather than regretful”
    “You can’t be reincarnated on Earth, that’s why i am holding onto your soul. At that time, you officially dead on earth after all, after negotiating with Earth’s god, you can keep your memories as it is so our world can develop. But if you suddenly have your memories after your birth, you will be burden by it, we seal it so when you reach 5 years old it will be released, but you already have your memories at 3 years old.]{Lime}” -> “You couldn’t be reincarnated on Earth, that’s why i am holding onto your soul. At that time, you were officially dead on earth after all, after negotiating with Earth’s god, you were allowed to keep your memories as it is so our world can develop. But if you suddenly had your memories after your birth, you would have be burdened by it, so we sealed it so that when you would reach 5 years old it would be released, but you already had your memories at 3 years old.]{Lime}”
    “Cain watching the god lower her head while apologizing” -> “Cain watched/watch the god lower her head while apologizing”
    “[Lime-sama, I have received this body for 5 years, i retrieve my memories for 2 years already, now i am having so much fun in this world. At the world before, i already dead, and kinda make me shock, i know it is foolish to hope to be back. And, the life before, i already lose my parents when i was little, and last one my grandfather too, left me alone. Now i have my family and my big sister. In this world, there’s magic and i really live my life, so please don’t apologize. On the contrary for letting me have my memories, I thank you from the bottom of my heart. At 3 years old, i retrieved my memories, I can learn a lot about language and magic, so it is no problem at all]” -> “Lime-sama, I have lived in this body for 5 years, i already retrieved my memories 2 years ago, now i am having a lot of fun in this world. At my former world, i am already dead, and this kinda shocked me, i know it is foolish to hope to go back. And, in my previous life, i already lost my parents when i was little, and lastly my grandfather too, left me alone. Now i have my family and my big sister. In this world, there’s magic and i really like my life, so please don’t apologize. On the contrary, for letting me have my memories back, I thank you from the bottom of my heart. At 3 years old, i retrieved my memories, I could learn a lot about language and magic, so it is no problem at all”
    “. Time to time i have been watching you, you know. I’ll give you my divine protection, please keep your training” -> “From time to time i have been watching you, you know. I’ll give you my divine protection, please keep training”
    “Meet again], i don’t know the meaning of that, Leine-neesan too has God of magic Divine protection, i am so grateful.” -> “Meet again, i don’t know what it is supposed to mean, but Leine-neesan too has the God of magic ‘s Divine protection, so i am grateful.”
    ” Lime and Reno is good right. The one sit beside her is God of Earth Bela. The opposite one with muscle is , God of Martial Arts, Sarnos. Beside him is God of skill Grim. the bigger one is God of Trade Panam ja.]{Zenom}” -> “Lime and Reno are at my right. The one sitting beside her is God of Earth Bela. The opposite one with muscles is God of Martial Arts Sarnos. Beside him is God of skill Grim. The bigger one is God of Trade Panam ja.]{Zenom}”
    “you can bring use your knowledge from previous life to this world.” -> “you can use your knowledge from your previous life in this world” I suppose ? The meaning is not clear.
    “Oo. The god’s statue are shining so brightly” -> “Oo. The god’s statues are shining so brightly”
    “After waiting for a while, the priest’s prayer has done.” -> “After waiting for a while, the priest’s prayer was done.”
    “The lights from before are the meaning the gods giving their divine protection is what i thinking. Please continue to grow up and feels gratitude to the gods by praying” -> “I think the lights from before means the gods gave their divine protection. Please continue to grow up and show your gratitude to the gods by praying”
    “We all, silence while riding the wagon” -> “We were all silent while riding the wagon”
    ” Maybe you really receive divine protection after all” -> ” Maybe you really received divine protection after all”
    “Father, thank you so much” -> “Father, thank you very much”
    “Leine is joining the conversation” -> “Leine joins the conversation”
    “While being shaken by the wagon, going back to home and arrive at our home.” -> Would be better with “While being shaken by the wagon, we finally arrived home”
    “It was Status right” -> In the previous chapter, Leine said “Status Open” so i think it would be better to put it here too
    “Invisible glass appear in front of me and displaying” -> “Invisible glass appear in front of me and displays :”
    “I place my hand on the place i fall, i still can’t stand up” -> Would be better with “I fall on my hands, I can’t stand up” no ? But it still is strange …
    “There’s a lot of place i want to complain.” -> “I want to complain about a lot of things.”
    “Anothe thing” -> “Another thing”
    ” Is there anyway i can hide my status…” -> ” Is there any way i can hide my status…”

    There you go. I’ll say it just in case, these are just suggestions and I’m not 100% sure they are right, please tell me if i made any faults. I know it is very hard to find the real sense of some sentences, I tried to improve them to clarify the meaning I thought they had. I only want to help. Btw if you don’t understand why I changed some things we can just talk about it, I’m not necessarily right …
    Thx and good luck for the next chapter ! Keep up the good work !

    Suka

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